How Thank You for Your Service’s Jason Hall Transformed From Actor to A-List Writer


Miles Teller in Thank You for Your Service. Photo courtesy: DreamWorks

Like many screenwriters, Jason Hall started his career as an actor. Buffy the Vampire Slayer and other TV shows kept him busy, but he was eager to move into film roles. When an actor-buddy gave him a movie script and suggested Hall audition for a role, his agents tried, but couldn’t get Hall the audition. The most frustrating part was the script was really bad.

Then he had an epiphany.

“I thought, ‘I can write a screenplay that’s at least as bad as that.’” So he set out to write a screenplay with a lead role perfect for him.

He took a Robert McKee story structure class. As an actor, he already understood what makes good dialogue and compelling characters. The thing that was most challenging to him in his early days of writing was character arcs.

“I had read the Carl Jung stuff about going into the cave but I didn’t fully understand it. I started asking around about character arcs and people would say, ‘You mean the first act turn?’ And I’d say, ‘No, that’s the story. I’m talking about the character.’ There seemed to be a lack of language about it. So I looked around and found a classicist.”

Photo courtesy: DreamWorks

When he read the book, Inside Story: The Power of the Transformational Arc by Dara Marks, the heavens opened up. Finally, he understood how and why characters arc. It completely changed how Hall approached his characters and his writing in general.

“She’s taken all the Joseph Campbell stuff and modernized it.”

After that, Hall says he became fervent about his work. “If I got notes on a screenplay, I’d stay up all night working on them and turn in the new draft the next day. If I got more notes that day, I’d do it again.”

Eventually, Hall’s research and hard work paid off. His first script turned out to be pretty good – so good, in fact, it garnered the attention of Oscar-winning director Milos Forman (One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest). But Forman had one request: he wanted another actor to play the lead role, not Hall.

“I was young, I was cocky. I told Milos to go f*ck himself.”

Hall moved on, wrote another screenplay about a blind wrestler, having wrestled as a kid, and couldn’t wait to play the part.  “I even named the protagonist Jason so there would be no confusion.”

But it happened again.

The drama follows a group of U.S. soldiers returning from Iraq who struggle to integrate back into family and civilian life, while living with the memory of a war that threatens to destroy them long after they’ve left the battlefield. (Photo credit: DreamWorks)

When Rounders director John Dahl became interested in his script, he wanted to cast Matt Damon as “Jason,” not Hall. So what did Hall do? “I said Matt Damon to go f*ck himself.” After that, his agents didn’t know what to do with him. He got new ones.

When he wrote his next screenplay, again, for himself, his new agents suggested Ashton Kutcher in the lead role.

But this time, it seemed Hall was finally catching on to how the Hollywood machine worked: if you want people to throw money at your script, you need a star.

Kutcher starred in the 2009 film Spread and it’s been full steam ahead for Hall as a screenwriter, not an actor, ever since.

It was Hall’s script for American Sniper that was the game-changer. Clint Eastwood directed, Bradley Cooper starred, and Hall was nominated for an Oscar for Best Adapted Screenplay.

Becoming a great writer comes with strong opinions, says Hall, who decided he wanted to direct his next film – he was ready.

Based on the book of the same name by David Finkle, Hall’s latest film is Thank You For Your Service, which he wrote and directed. In it, Miles Teller plays Adam, a war vet who just returned from Iraq. Sadly, war has deeply changed Adam in profound ways. He’s dealing with his own psychological hell: nightmares, flashbacks triggered by sound, mood swings, suicidal thoughts. The film takes an excruciatingly close look at the chaos and havoc our soldiers bring home with them in the form of PTSD. It also depicts the failings of the VA.

This is a very important film, considering 22 American veterans commit suicide every single day.

Though Hall doesn’t see the American war machine changing anytime soon, he is hopeful the film will provoke conversations and inspire people to ask the vets they know and love questions. After one vet and his wife saw the movie, the wife asked her husband if he had any untold stories like the ones in the film.

“It opened a door for this guy to tell his story.” He adds, “I really hope this movie can bring audiences who see it a little closer to understanding the experience the vets had, or what it’s like to come home from this war – or any war – and be integrated into society. I hope we can start to have that conversation.”

Thank You for Your Service opens October 27.


Shanee Edwards graduated from UCLA Film School with an MFA in Screenwriting and is currently the film critic for She recently won the Next MacGyver television writing competition to create a TV show about a female engineer. Her pilot, Ada and the Machine, is currently in development with America Ferrera's Take Fountain Productions. You can follow her on Twitter: @ShaneeEdwards

2 Replies to "How Thank You for Your Service’s Jason Hall Transformed From Actor to A-List Writer"

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    Jo November 6, 2017 (8:16 am)

    Love this story. What a great illustration of how your niche can find you in Hollywood.

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    Joe Bousquin November 6, 2017 (1:54 pm)

    “Inside Story” by Dara Marks should be required reading for anyone struggling with character. My sister (who is also a writer) gave it to me this year for my birthday, and it opened avenues and insights into character I never would have discovered on my own. While it’s not exactly an easy read — I think I spent a good three months on it my first time through — it is well worth it. While it’s definitely a respected and known title among screenwriting books, I’m surprised it’s not more widely referred to by writers. I was happy to see it mentioned here.

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